Hotspot Week 2

Hello , welcome to

my blog.

This is my week 2

Hotspot writing.

We have been

learning to show

don't tell.

DATE

WRITING

31-7-2019

Week 2 Finish the table below by describing each of the ‘Telling’ sentences. SHOW Don’t Tell Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano. Brian was angry. He started to yell. An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears. Johnny felt sad. Bailey smiled, she sang as she skipped. Bailey was happy. Jeremy Was Shocked Jeremy was shocked. Tama kicked the ball.  The ball went  Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon. Thank you for reading my blog.